I agree with EmperorCharlemagne
I completely agree with Emperor Charlemange with his review. Being more daring would REALLY help this entire piece. Call it an 'update' (in the musical world its arrangement) or whatever, even arrangements differ in variations.
You have some good musical ideas for your percussion. So I will give credit where it is due but, please equalize the bass drum as it comes off raspy on a 5.1 Stereo sound system.