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[Melody of the Wind]

A little bit of criticism

I tend to have a problem with music not sounding organic enough. You have a nice concept of harmony but, there is no 'melody' of the wind that I can discern. There are no dynamic changes in the piece either (a staple of a quality piece). There is maybe a little bit of a Rossini crescendo at the end but, that is it. (A Rossini Crescendo is the layring of music to give the illusion of an actual crescendo, a favorite technique of mine.)

I suggest you take these comments and use them to make better music.

6/10
3/5

Ryukenjin responds:

My main focus in this song was to give the feeling of how the wind should be described song wise. It can be the same most of the time, have slight changes to it, unpredictable, then fierce, and can go back to normal. I have no "music" experience really other than 6th grade band. All music talk I don't really understand, but it doesn't take knowing music lingo to make good music. I try the best I can with what knowledge I have or gain. You can hear progression in my old stuff compared to new.

As for the things you said, I have no idea what you are talking about, so I can't do anything about it. Sorry, but voicing your opinion is 1 thing that you can do on the internet, so thanks for the review.... I think.

[fUNK mETAL]

too many nay votes

This is pretty good. Keep it up. Too many people voted this low. the ending can be a little dry at times however. Try to keep away from unneeded sounds. The beginning and middle sections were an absolute joy :)

FanceyPants responds:

its people like you that i like. Thanks i can use the info and make things better.

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Very very nice

If you performed this, I am very impressed. I just wish I could get such recording quality on my own piano ;) You might want to consider mixing this with a few electronic elements. Synth strings in the lower register would provide a nice entrancing background.

paradoxphenomena responds:

Thanks, its a great idea, though this time around I just meant to do a cover of an exceptional piece.

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Yay!

Someone who knows when to use organic and artificial electronic sounds!

tijnn responds:

Hehehe ;D